Student Writing #2-Qtr 1- Kelsey
This is 1 of 3 stories. The first of my stories is about Anna. The second about Nikki. The third about how they meet and change each others lives forever. Anna was an outcast and had no friends and was too shy to talk and Nikki was outgoing and didn’t care about what people thought of her, she was a little different and no one really liked her either but she was…original. Before they knew it, they would change each others lives forever.
Part 1-Anna
Anna Turner… shy, lonely, no friends, not happy. Anna is in 7th grade and she has never had a friend in her life. Her family didn’t even like her that much and they didn’t give her full support. She was the complete opposite of outgoing and there was nothing really special about her. People say that everyone has a special talent or something different about them but that wasn’t true for Anna…well not that people could see.
As a little girl, Anna was beat up everyday. No one seemed to care about her or really pay attention to her feelings. At school her teachers wouldn’t notice her or seem to care about her. She occasionally would try to come out of her shell and talk but she was ignored over and over again.
Being shy became a big problem for Anna, she would always pee her pants during lunch because she was afraid to ask to go to the restroom and she would never eat because she was afraid to talk to the lunch ladies. She had some big problems but soon and very soon she would meet someone that would change her world forever.
To be continued….
October 26th, 2009 at 9:40 am
Kels-
This is a beautiful piece of writing. I enjoyed it so much. You used descriptive words and phrases. I think Anna sounds like a pretty awesome person. I’m gonna read parts 2 and 3 now…:)
- Anna T