Student Writing #2-Mason
Basketball
so difficult
at times I
just want to die
It hurts so good I
do not understand the pain
for a game with
a small gain
I love
Basketaball
Greenwood Lab School
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November 1st, 2009 at 8:17 pm
Mason,
This poem has a lot of feeling in it, but it is very short. It needs to be a little longer next time.
Anna M.