Student Writing #4-Mason
Baseball
the diamond
of the immortals
legends of our time
legends before we took over
it was free of steroids
over run with lies
a giant shadow
cast over
baseball
Greenwood Lab School
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October 28th, 2009 at 9:47 pm
this has great structure but relate some life examples.
November 1st, 2009 at 8:19 pm
Mason,
I like how you made your poem in the shape of a half-diamond. It is like a baseball diamond. I’m not sure if you did this on purpose, but it is very cool.
Anna M.