Student Writting 1- Christina
The woods are a nice place. Full of singing birds and hoping rabbits. The smell of honey sickle growing near by. It is a place were it seems nothing could go wrong. That’s when I got that weird felling someone was watching me. I turned around, nobody was there but I still felt that someone was watching me. The I heard the crackle of leaves as someone or something was coming closer and closer to me. That’s when I started to run. I didn’t know were I was going. I climbed up into a tree were I waited holding my breath as they came closer and closer. I could so the shadow of the creature as it became bigger and bigger with every step it took. Then it came into sight. It was a deer the whole time. I had ran away from I deer that unknowingly was coming towards me.
November 6th, 2009 at 9:39 pm
Good job Christina, But I do wish you could make it sound a little better and/or longer. Other than that good job
November 15th, 2009 at 12:52 pm
That was good. It was short and simple, but was filled with detail. Nice job!