Lensie F. Student writing 1
I am walking in the park on a cold Saturday morning. I hear the wind blowing and a dog barking. I see a few people walking around the park. I see I women with a small child, that looks about the age of two, and I see a man walking his small dog. I smelt the smell the smell of nature. I see leaves and frost on the ground. It was very cold, I felt a nice chill.
I now set down on a bench in the bark, and watched as more and more children came to play. They were going down slides, singing, talking, swinging, and playing with their, friends, they were having lots of fun! I was feeling very cold, so I decided to go home. I started walking on the path that leads me to my house, it was about a ten minute walk. On my way home I saw bikers, runners, and people walking. A small child was biking with her father, and fell of her bike, and rolled off the sidewalk to the grass. She was about the age of six, I stoped walking to help her up. She was crying and had a scraped knee, but her father said she would be fine, and thanked me for helping.
I then arrived at my house. Very tired and worn out from the park, so I decided to grab a blanket, and watch some T.V. There was nothing good on, so I decided to watch the news. I then fell asleep, because I was so tired. I had a very fun day at the park, and I hoped to go again someday soon, and bring my dog named penny.
November 15th, 2009 at 12:50 pm
That was a really good writing. The setting was a perfect for a student writing.