Comments for Greenwood Lab School

Comment on Student Writing #4-Mason by shelerfosho

shelerfosho — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 02:47:22 +0000

this has great structure but relate some life examples.

Comment on Student Writing #3-Mason by shelerfosho

shelerfosho — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 02:38:53 +0000

this is pretty good but i would make it longer and use what we learned in class today.

Comment on reading letter#5 nick sherrell by bballboy

bballboy — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:30:43 +0000

Nick,
I think you should expand on how you feel about the book and express your feelings more thoroughly. I think you told enough about the book didn’t say too much or too little
-Caleb

Comment on student writing #3 nick sherrell by bballboy

bballboy — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:23:38 +0000

Nick,
This is a good poem i think you could expand on it though and make it an exellent poem

-Caleb

Comment on writing #4- Hallie Sutton “Beauty is…” by bballboy

bballboy — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:21:21 +0000

Hallie,
THis is an excellent poem it was very easy to read and had a nice flow.

-Caleb

Comment on Writing 4 draft 1-Christina by bballboy

bballboy — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 18:17:57 +0000

Christina,
This writing is very interesting there are some punctuation missing and some grammatical errors. Other than that i think this will turn out to be a good story

Comment on The Farm Final-Christina by chuck314

chuck314 — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 15:48:50 +0000

This was pretty interesting. I didn’t know you had a farm.

Comment on Writing #1 – Caleb by chuck314

chuck314 — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 15:47:35 +0000

Really? Again? You need three haiku’s for a writing.

Comment on Writing #2 -Caleb by chuck314

chuck314 — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 15:46:40 +0000

What?!?! You need three haiku’s for a writing.

Comment on writing #3 by chuck314

chuck314 — Mon, 26 Oct 2009 15:46:03 +0000

Who wrote this they need three haiku’s for a writing.