8 thoughts on “Student Writing 3- Kelley”

1. Kelley,

   I really enjoy this poem. I could not find any errors. Very well done.

   Sam

2. Kelley, I love your adjectives. It makes the poem really good. I like how it was about racecar’s. Good job!

   Seth

3. Kelley I really like your poem, I have read some of your previous car poems and this one is really good. I like the way you describe speed in this poem.

   -Nick H.

4. I liked that you put something I know you like a lot (CARS!) into a poem

5. Kelley
   good poem, but it was short. I like how you made it a dimond.

6. Good job Kelley
   this was very creative I liked how you involved it this with something that you enjoy such as racing. Overall Good job
   Raphael

7. This was kinda weird. Its is short but it is still a poem.

8. I really enjoyed your poem it was very inventive and i liked how the poem is short and fast just like a race would be. – Taylor