Grey
Chains creaky like a rusty zipper
Misty hail fragile as brittle bones
Cobblestone as gloomy as A dim stormy day
Pearl as foggy as the dark and mysterious moon
Wolfs, ashy like a dark asphalt road
Charcoal sheep inky like burned ash
Foil diamonds as cloudy as foggy glass
I really like this poem but the different elements seem unconnected and it overall doesn’t feel very cohesive. Otherwise I think this is really good.