5 thoughts on “Student Writing #3- Sean”

1. Sean, this poem is pretty good, but next time I think that Ms. Gibson would prefer you to write another poem next to the acrostic or just write another acrostic, but this acrostic s pretty good, it describes friendship well.

   -Nick H.

2. Good job sean but maybe next time make them phrases instead of just having words, and next time it would be better if you had a different type of poems because acrostics are some of the easiest to write.
   Raphael

3. Sean,
   I like your creativity, but you need to choose a more complicated type of poem than an acrostic.

   -Seth

4. I agree with nick it is good but Ms. Gibson said she probable won’t give you full credit.
   Christina

5. Sean, I like this poem, I did not see any punctuations in your story, and also I like how you made it about friends. Good job.

   Kodi J.