i felt sad when it came through
as all true lovers do
when night touched the dawn
it reminded me of that song
you had danced your dance
i had watched as day started to fade
wish you were here
but now you’re gone
so ill sing you song.
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this is good, really short. you may want to go back and add more and do capitalization!
That is really good. The only thing I would fix is capitalize your “I”‘s.
Christina
nick s-
Good job! This is a really good poem. Check a few grammatical errors but other that that, wonderful poem!
– Anna T
really short, and no punctuation or capitialization
Nick,
This is a good poem i think you could expand on it though and make it an exellent poem
-Caleb