I am so happy
the season started
again.
It started just this
weekend in Bahrain.
It’s Formula One,
my favorite racing
series.
It contains the best
of the best. It’s not
on an oval track,
they actually have
to turn left and right.
Unlike my least
favorite, Nascar.
I have seen races
in many places.
They are extremely
exciting and fun.
I truly can’t wait
to see another
in 2011.
I am so happy
the season started
again.
Kelley,
I like your comparison of Formula 1 and Nascar. In my opinion it isn’t very skilled driving unless you turn different ways. Plus Formula 1 is more exciting to me. Good job, and I hope you have fun at your race.
Seth
Im glad that your Formula 1 racing series you care so much about has started. Formula 1 racing seems like it would keep my attention better than Nascar, becuase you said it , they don’t just drive in a circle. I also think it would be cool to drive Formula 1 cars, but I probably will nevver get the chance. i did not find any spelling or grammar errors in you student writing. This was very good Kelley.
I like how you made a poem about something you like. Just from your poem I have learned a lot about racing. You also did a good job with spelling.