4th Quarter Student Writing 4- Seth

One beautiful August morning Steven woke up to the honking of cars.  Steven gets up and gets ready to go to work.  Steven  works at the New York Zoo.  Steven is the zookeeper.  Steven has had many mishaps in the past, but he hopes today will be a good day.

Steven is driving his truck to the zoo so he can get ready for work.  When he gets to work his boss tells him that he has a very interesting job today.  “What is it?!?!” cried Steven the Zookeeper.  His boss tells him that he will be working with an endangered species today.  Steven will be working with the endangered spider monkeys.  These are Steven’s favorite animals so he is very excited.  The cage Steven is cleaning out today is the “Small Monkey” exhibit.  Steven sees that the Monkeys aren’t even paying attention to him so he investigates.  Steven discovers some very unfamiliar mushrooms in the back of the cage.  Steven starts out the door to tell his boss, until he realizes that he did it again.  Steven left the door OPEN!  All of the Spider Monkeys escaped into the zoo.  One of the monkeys decides to chew the electrical wires.  The wire explodes and a gigantic fire begins to rage.  Steven doesn’t know what to do…

The NYFD arrives very quickly and starts to extinguish the fire.  Steven is still completely puzzled and in shock and to make matters worse his boss is furious.  Steven tries to calm him down, but   Once the fire is out Steven’s boss finally calms down, but he his still very angry.  Some how Steven pulls it off and gets his job back.  Completely AMAZING!!!

THE END

One thought on “4th Quarter Student Writing 4- Seth

  1. Seth,
    This was a very original and creative piece of writing! I really enjoyed reading it, and didn’t see many problems at all. Keep up the good work!

    Riley

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