4th Quarter Student Writing #3-Mason

Nate Page, was a happy American blacksmith. He had a wife and a fifteen year old son, named David. Nate was working when day at his blacksmith shop, when all of the sudden a messenger told him that his wife was very ill. He stopped what he was doing and got in his horse drawn buggy and headed home. Unluckily for Nate the Rush Hour traffic had already started. He waited, waited and waited, frantically hoping traffic would move. He finally gave up and got out of his buggy and ran. Nate was running and running and running. He finally got home when he realized his wife was gone. Nate was so upset he was about to kill himself, when he heard the sound of voices coming from outside. He looks out the window and sees his son walking with his friends. He realizes that not only would it not be fair to him, it wouldn’t be fair for his fifteen year old son to get home and find both of his parents dead. His son walks in and sees his dad mourning over the couch which lays a sheet. David was sick with grief that his mom is dead. He just is so overwhelmed. This is such a crucial moment for the Page Family. This is when they decide to pack up all their belongings to start a new life in Oregon.

To Be Continued

3 thoughts on “4th Quarter Student Writing #3-Mason

  1. Mason, this is a good story and sounds like it could be very interesting. But considering this is your third writing, when are you going to continue it?

  2. Mason,

    This is a very good writing. I could only find a few minor errors. Such as; spelling, and grammar. Otherwise very well done.

    Sam

  3. Good job mason. Are there even blacksmiths anymore? Where does he live? Include these in your sequel.

    Seth

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