CARSON- writing- 1 -Qr 4

Patrick Star; By Carson and Zach

 

There once was a starfish named Patrick

He could do a cool trick

He liked to lie in the sun,

some times he would burn his buns

 

He sometimes stalked his friend sponge bob

                                               Even though he was kind of a slob

and it wasn’t his mom

But they were best friends not named tom

 

Their neighbor Squid ward was kind a jerk

He constantly yelled at sponge bob and Patrick as they were playing like lerks

 

Because he was always so lame, but thanks to Patrick it’s was his house, that went up in flames

 

Patrick knew that sponge bob like his pet snail and though that he was a nurse

Then Patrick winded up just making things worse.

And sponge bob ended up paying the vet right out of his purse

Then Patrick went home wishing Gary was not in a hurse

 

Sponge bob went home to mourn Gary’s passing

So he went back and started to stare, at the T.V. while laughing

He realized that he did something wrong so he went out and got sponge bob a cake that was perfectly made and nicely baked

Sponge bob realized that Patrick was sorry

 so he forgave and in return Sponge bob gave him a brand new Ferrari

2 thoughts on “CARSON- writing- 1 -Qr 4

  1. It’s funny, and the content is good, but grammar needs a bit of work…

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