Chocolate DRAFT
I feel as if I am melting.
I taste bittersweet happiness
As the sweet treat melts on my tongue.
Making me feel good all the way through
I never want to stop eating.
Why is it so good?
Why do my taste buds crave this strange food?
I do not know
I do not care.
I just want to keep eating.
It is addictive,
And makes life easy.
I swallow and the taste is gone.
I feel empty,
I crave more.
But I must not eat any more.
Chocolate.
Your poem is very good. you contradict yourself on lines 2 and 3. Overall excellent.
Anna,
Good student writing. You did a good job of asking ?s. Nice work!
Lensie