Love and Cheer
By Kelsey Nau
Christmas is my favorite time of year
When my family comes together
Filled with love and cheer
Christmas eve is when we get excited
For we know exactly what might happen
Santa is on his way to bring us presents
For in the morning the kids shall be in heaven
It is a wonderful time of year
Filled with love and cheer
Although many kids get what they want
Many other kids unfortunately don’t
Maybe their parents can’t afford it
Or maybe they are just less fortunate
We should reach out and do what we can
For all the children and all of man
Lets make sure
To make this year…
Filled with, a lot, of love and cheer
Kelsey,
This is a good student writing. Good job on added lot’s of detail.
Lensie
Dear Kelsey,
That was a good writing. i liked how you set it up… Looks cool.