3rd Quarter Student Writing #1- Steven

Bang! The pellets whizzed by Fuego as he hid behind the bunker. “How did i get in to this?” he asked himself. He tried to remember how his day all started…. 6:45 a.m He woke up for for school. Took his shower, ate his breakfast, the usual. He got in trouble in second period because he had to go to the bathroom but the teacher wouldn’t let him, but Fugeo went anyways. He endend up peeing his pants, though. “What help that was,” he was thinking to himself, still trying to figure out how this happnend. After school he went to go shoot some hoops with his friends. He beat them in 21, dunking it for the final point. They were really jealous. After he finished his game, he took the bus home to finish his homework, but some of his friends had stopped him and took him with them. “Now I remember…,” he was thinking to himself. His friends took him to go play paintball for the first time. And that puts us where we are right now. Even thought it was his first time playing, he was amazing at paintball. He was picking guys out, one after one, until it was him and the best paintball player in New York, Bobby Boyo. They were both firing at each other, until Fuego thought he had a clear shot, so he stood up, but them Bobby shot him right in his jugular. He died three minutes later. The End.

One thought on “3rd Quarter Student Writing #1- Steven

  1. This was hilarious Steven! I really liked it and thought it was a good enough length to say everything you needed to say to make it a complete story. Well written, but check for spelling and grammar if I read the piece correctly!

    Riley

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